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Family Guy part 1
When peter trips over one of stewie’s toys, falls on the ground and ends up breaking his favourite coffee mug. To his surprise a genie pops out of the broken pieces “hi, name a place and I shall send you there for a week! Muahahaha!!” Laughs the genie!! “Oh! Peter! This is great! A week’s vacation!! We could go to the Caribbean like we always wanted!!” Says Louis. “Wwwwwaait a minute!! This man looks a bit too odd to be a genie!!” Says Peter. “It's because of my accent isn’t it!!” Shouts the genie. “Oh! Boy! This is more awkward than the time Michael Jackson volunteered to baby-sit Stewie.” Peter sighs.
FLASHBACK
Oh! No I am not accusing you of anything man, its just that, "long pause", me and Louis decided we're going to have a nice evening at home! Says peter looking up at the ceiling and avoiding confrontation, while Michael is looking down at the floor with disappointment
END OF FLASHBACK
Peter, the man is been standing there for half and hour, maybe you should hurry up and make a decision! Says Brian. This would be an excellent time to get read of my biggest enemy!! Harry Potter!! Says stewie, Hogwarts school is where were heading! Shouts stewie with joy, and to the surprise of the family, before stewie could finish sentence they were are all in a dark room full of witchcrafts where there was a big feast celebrating Harry Potter's engagement to Cho Chang.
Hey, you guys! Maybe we should lay low so we don’t get singled out or get into some sort of trouble! Whispers Brian. I think it's too late for that!! Says Louis angrily, as peter is fighting with a witch, I wanted that piece of chicken and you knew that I was about to grab it!! Screams peter. There is plenty more chicken! There is no need to be greedy!! Fights back the witchcraft. Silence! Shouts Harry Potter. I want them both sent the chamber of torture for the next 2 days!! Demands Harry. OH! COME ON!! He knew I wanted that piece of chicken! Shouts Peter while being dragged out by the guards. Stop! Shouts Harry! Bring the fat chap to me at once!
OH!! Come on kid, it was only a piece of chicken, lets not make a big deal out of nothing! Alright? Interferes Brian. Catch doggy!! Was Harry’s response as he threw Brian a bone. This is a worse misunderstanding than when I spilled my glass of white wine on the bed sheet …FLASH BACK… peter comes home from his anger management meeting and goes up to his bed room. “Lewis!!” Shouts peter as he smacks his wife on the face. END OF FLASHBACK
Harry: Are you the one they call Peter?
No, she is. Said peter pointing at Meg.
Louis: OH! Peter! Stop it!
Potter: I really need your help
Peter: Me?
Harry: Yes!
Peter: shoot!
Harry: ok, so I want your son over there to take my place for a week
Peter interrupts: that’s my daughter Meg, my Son is over there
Chris is standing next to a witch with his head down apologising: I am sorry I broke your broom, but I thought it was magic and it would make me fly.
Witch says: it is a magic broom, but even magic can not handle that much weight!
Peter interrupts: hey Chris, come over here!
Chris: what’s up dad?
Peter: you are going to stay in Hogwarts for a while and were going to take Harry instead of you
Harry explains: which would mean that you would have to be me for a while, and that’s why ABRA CADABRA!!
All of a sudden Chris turns all skinny and his voice started to change.
Chris: I feel a bit too skinny dad!!
Peter slaps Chris and says: Damn it! No son of mine is going to be a homosexual!
Harry looks quite pissed and says: hey!! That’s just the British accent mate!!
Peter: Oh! Yes! I am sorry son. I just don’t have any tolerance towards…. And before finished his sentence, he was sitting on his couch at home in Quahog.
Louis: Harry, we need to make a few changes to your appearance.
Harry: why is that?
Louis: well. Why don’t you find out for yourself?
Peter: Chris, could u go get the paper son?
Harry: ok, dad.
Harry goes out for around half an hour then comes in the house, with his face covered in eggs.
Louis: Chris, I don’t want to say I told you so!! (Then bursts out laughing)
Harry goes up and to shower, and then goes into his new room, opens his closet, then runs down the stairs and screams: there is a monkey in my closet!!
Louis and Peter's only reaction was hard laughter.
Peter : Meg, what were you doing in your brother's closet
...continues..
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